Kia ora Blake, my name is Caleb and I’m in intermediate, I go to Taipa area school. I liked the timeline that you chose it was interesting. You reminded me of the hot springs in Paihia. Maybe you could work on adding more detail to your story next time
Kia ora Blake, my name is Caleb and I’m in intermediate, I go to Taipa area school.
ReplyDeleteI liked the timeline that you chose it was interesting.
You reminded me of the hot springs in Paihia.
Maybe you could work on adding more detail to your story next time