Welcome back
I'm really looking forward to this term because we have a new teacher called Miss Reissmann and we still have Mrs Prendergast.
This is my literacy work for this week.
We were learning about opposites (antonyms), adjectives, nouns and verbs about them. We made our words into a diamante poem about ANZAC day. I hope you like it, if you do comment what you like about it.
I like your poem, could you possibly squash the 4 lines up to fit closer to the rest of the poem, this would make the poem more like a shape of a diamond.
ReplyDeleteHi I relly like your post
ReplyDeleteHey Blake!
ReplyDeleteGreat poem! Just maybe next time put your poem underneath your writing because I didnt know what it was about and had to go back and read it again. Happy tearm 2!
From Hannah,
Yaldhurst Model School